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Commission Ana and Kerry

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Commission for [link]
Ana is character [link]
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

First, the little blond girl's expression. Hers looks somewhat stiff, like you started drawing a happy, laughing girl, and then you changed your mind. A nervous expression comes from a lot of details, sacred eyes, uncertain laugther... The tan girl looks great on her expression, she looks a mix of bothered and somewhat used to this kind of shenanigans, which I love.

The legs beneath the knee on the tan girl are way too bent, and the position is just unnatural. If the tentacles grabbed her knees that way, she could just free herself from them without trouble, you need a tigther grip, mamaybe tentacles pulling the ankles to force her into the position you drew.

As for propotions, they look a little skewed. The tan girl has a very long tail, while the blond girl has very big hips. The hands a re somewhat small, considering the size of her faces. Hands should be able to cover the face, fully extended.

The tan girl's breasts need something more than just the tip of a tentacle pushing to deform that way, this is a tricky situation, since tentacles would press on a small area instead of pressing the breasts like that. maybe two or three tentacles convering in a hand of sorts to apply enough pressure on the surface, other than that you are not going to get that deformation.

This is a very ambitious pose, and it's great that you dared to go for it!